Hey lionriver, thanks very much for getting involved in our Godbreakers rewards! Just wanted to leave you a message as we've withheld a prize on this occasion and one other recently, and I wanted to explain why and give a gentle steer.
In this case, there's a pretty jarring clash between the in-game audio and your voiceover - combat is loud, and when NPCs are speaking we can't hear your words. The video footage is also misaligned with the points that you're making. For example, at the point when you discuss the tension when playing with the Licence To Kill tangle, you're not playing with it equipped (as monsters are taking multiple hits).
On the other unsuccessful video, we had asked for a video of the boss fight itself, and you submitted an entire run through the biome. Please take care to read reward descriptions carefully and submit only what the reward requests.
Hope this helps and to see more of your content soon!