Hey ExponentThanatos - thanks for entering. This is close, but it doesn't quite meet the structure of a limerick. For example: 'From the ruins arose a king cast down' contains ten syllables, which means that the final line should too. However, that line only contains seven syllables.
Also, we're really looking for limericks that match the game's story and character of King Mikolt. It may be that you're further ahead in the game than I am, but the story of your limerick doesn't match what I know of King Mikolt.
Feel free to delete and try again