Hey Joshualee, thanks for entering this reward. Unfortunately, we're rejecting your submission as it doesn't reach the quality threshold we're looking for, but it's clear you've put some effort into it so I wanted to offer some specific feedback and explain why.

• Be concise. The first 1:25 of your video is just filler as you cycle to the race. A video about how to be fast on one specific track only needs to include the track itself, or viewers will likely click off out of boredom. It needs to get to the point quickly.

• Don't commentate live; record your footage, then write a script and add the commentary afterwards. There are lots of repeated lines, plenty of filler, and parts where you're unsure what to say next.

• Explain some of your tips in slightly more detail. You mention things like "speed tuck the first hill" and "tucking all the jumps" but you should assume the viewer is a newbie and doesn't know what that means. Explain what a tuck is and how to do it.

  • One great way of showing how beneficial those specific mechanics-focused tips are would be to show footage side by side of you using those techniques, then showing the race without them being used. The clip of the speed tuck, for example, should be quicker, so the viewer can see first-hand how useful it is and how much time gets saved.

• Consider showing all the individual parts of the track and how to take them, then finishing the video with your best run putting all those tips together. It'll make the video longer, but it'll have far more detail and those tips will be actionable for the viewer.

• This reward also requires accurate on-platform SEO, tags, and the like. We're not being too strict with it, but you should ensure the video has the game name in the title at the very least. Something like: "MAVRIX: Helfare Hot Rod tips and tricks" or "MAVRIX Helfare Hot Rod guide: how to go faster", for example.

• Finally, just a tip: you don't need to introduce the video by explaining it's for a Just reward. We're here to help you grow your channel and following, but your viewers likely don't know who we are. So while we require tagging in the description, it can just be a "This video was made for a Just reward." alongside the link at the very bottom.

You're well on your way to getting the hang of it, especially since your voice is clear and easy to listen to which goes a long way when producing videos, and you're clearly damn good at MAVRIX, so hopefully these tips help! You're welcome to delete your submission and have another go with a new, updated video if you'd like, or just take this advice into account for future videos.