Hey Solaris, I'm afraid this doesn't meet the rules of a limerick. Try this format:
Line a) 8-10 syllables, final syllable rhymes with lines b) and e). Line b) 8-10 syllables, final syllable rhymes with lines a) and e) Line c) 5-7 syllables, final syllable rhymes with line d) Line d) 5-7 syllables, final syllable rhymes with line c) Line e) 8-10 syllables, final syllable rhymes with lines a) and b)
Hey Solaris, thanks for bringing this to our attention. We've just noticed that the 'edit submission' and 'delete submission' buttons have gone missing during our reward page makeover. We're going to get those re-added as soon as possible. In the meantime, if you want to manually post the link to your updated limerick as a reply to this comment, I'll manually credit your wallet with any winnings