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Argonal

3 weeks ago

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Make a funny wildlife film about any Zooseum animal!๐Ÿผ

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Rich

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Hey Argonal, I'm afraid we've had to mark this unsuccessful, but it's excellent in many ways, and I wanted to leave a comment explaining our decision and offering some encouragement.

Your script is well-written with lots of funny moments, and your footage is really well-chosen and illustrative. I especially like that you've made the effort to include multiple takes of the habitat, plus the expedition map and the animal care centre.

The big problem is your microphone. The gain is set too low, so your voiceover is really quiet, and we're getting quite a few audio pops and breathy moments. If you could fix these and maybe add a bit more energy to your delivery, this would be a Curator's Pick and probably boost-able.

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Argonal

Yeah, I've been trying to find a way to improve my audio because I also noticed it. Is that more like a hypothetical "if you could" as in better luck next time or can I actually resubmit?

I might not be able to re-edit until this coming weekend though.

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Rich

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The reward has technically closed, but it's important to us to reward skilled creators. If you'd like to re-edit, repost, and share the link here, we'll make a manual payment of the reward prize into your platform wallet.


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